बनारसी ठग …!!!
ठगों की नगरी , जिला बनारस,
आ पहुंचे हम , एक दिवारस ;
ट्रेन से उतरे , चप्पल गायब,
सोचा ही था , क्या होगा अब ?
पलट के देखा , बैग न पाया ,
अब तो हमरा , दिल घबराया ;
जल्द ही हमने , रपट लिखाई ,
थानेदार को , कुछ भेंट चढाई |
निकले बहार तो , जोर से आई ,
पैखाने तक , दौड़ लगाई ;
पतलून वहीँ पर , हमने गंवाई
कच्छे ने थी , इज्ज़त बचाई |
बटुए का था , बचा सहारा ,
खोल के देखा , खाली सारा !!
बुशर्ट से अपनी , तब ली विदाई ,
उन पैसों की, टिकट बनायी |
ट्रेन में बैठे , शर्म थी आई,
देख रही थीं , सबकी लुगाई ;
बस !! जान बची तो , लाखों पाए ,
लौट के नंगे , घर को आये !!!
. – संभव
January 25, 2009 at 1:57 am
Awesome man!!!
January 25, 2009 at 2:53 am
Really awesome. Some poet, you are.
January 25, 2009 at 5:43 pm
niice 🙂
January 25, 2009 at 5:51 pm
“देख रही थी सबकी लुगाई ” This was awesome…:))
Nice poem!!
January 25, 2009 at 7:49 pm
Awesome buddy!!
U hv written like a professional Poet.
January 25, 2009 at 8:06 pm
awesome man … Adi must read this … badi badhai karta hai banaras ki 😛
January 25, 2009 at 9:01 pm
roflmao man 😀
January 25, 2009 at 9:27 pm
bhai yeh to personal attack ho raha hai :P.. waise aapki kavita prashansa ke yogya hai….. shabdo ka chayan aapne badi chaturayee se kiya ahi 😛
January 26, 2009 at 12:47 am
wah wah! .. wah wah!
January 26, 2009 at 12:07 pm
hehe.. amazing!
January 26, 2009 at 12:43 pm
really nice…..
January 26, 2009 at 7:38 pm
Totally Awesome 🙂
January 27, 2009 at 10:50 am
enjoyed reading it.. awesome!
January 27, 2009 at 11:02 am
s00per Anna ….
but need to correct this one “देखा रही थीं ” to “देख रही थीं”
January 27, 2009 at 2:31 pm
aha .. Tinka bhai …. ud lo ab to .. Awesome one ..[:)]
January 27, 2009 at 3:43 pm
hehe…really nice..[:)]
January 27, 2009 at 6:13 pm
Bhai no match….
This one can be published…
Awesome creativity!!!
January 27, 2009 at 7:30 pm
=)) awesome!
January 27, 2009 at 11:52 pm
awesome bhai….maze aa gaye padh kar…i hope tune hi likhi ho… 🙂
January 28, 2009 at 1:38 pm
This one made for a really interesting read…Keep writing 🙂
January 28, 2009 at 1:52 pm
mast likhi hai yaar Tinke …. simply awesome
January 28, 2009 at 4:31 pm
lagta hai personal experience hai janaab ka 🙂
likha achha hai…mazaa aaya padh ke
March 13, 2009 at 11:56 am
bahut bindaas or mast haa………….
very good.
waise ye kab hua?????………….hehehhehe
September 14, 2009 at 4:36 pm
awsome 🙂
September 16, 2009 at 2:35 pm
MCD !!!! ajab aur gajab hai 🙂